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Wednesday, May 30, 2012

I am free (Olivia)

I just jumped out of a plane... I did it , all my fears have long gone and now the wind is whipping my face at tremendous speeds,and I feel weightless.Never have I had enough courage to even get on a plane but now I’m jumping.As I’m falling the rush of the wind makes my bones tingle, and the adrenalin of spreading my arms and legs it amazing, my floppy cheeks are dancing because the downward momentum is forcing them to.And I didn’t even mention the view, up here thousands of beige and creme, brown and white, yellow and blue buildings are surrounding the world below me , the clouds are above me, the sky is around me, my friends are all around me.The feeling of flying crosses my mind a few times, I’m not looking forward to ever reaching the ground.This moment I wish could last forever,I can only just manage a smile before a river of saliva and spit come out and explode all over my jiggly face, my palms start to sweat and tears rush out of the small cracks in my eyelids,I feel as if the part of my brain that controls fear has just been sucked out of me, My fingers start to wiggle and my toes start to curl up inside of my boots and once again I spread my arms and pretend I am a bird taking it’s first flight in it’s life,not wanting to ever forget this memory, not ever going back to being grounded and stuck in a world of fear, I am free! Olivia

7 comments:

  1. Wow that's an amazing piece of writing Olivia. I had a clear picture of someone falling.

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  2. WOW!!! I ,love the adjectives. " My cheeks are dancing " I love that sentence.

    :)

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  3. AMAZING !! Great piece of writing!! :)

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  4. I love you're witing...nice work!!!

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  5. AMAZING piece Of Writing Olivia Keep up the Great work.

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  6. mareta zepa nisa kalauga ielua:)June 11, 2012 at 11:50 AM

    well liban i think you are bthe smartest person in the class i think i dont know but dont tell anyone that i said you are the smartest bro you have well presented this piece off writing bro shot shot shot:)

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  7. mareta zepa nisa kalauga ielua:)June 11, 2012 at 12:45 PM

    is that are scary story because it is AWESOME!

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