She ducked as the plate smashed against the wall behind her..
Luckily she ducked, if she didn’t, she would get smashed by the strong, metallic plate and her face would start bleeding like red food colouring. Her brother James was playing frisbee with the plate because he said it would be fun. After the plate got smashed by the wall Katie’s heart was beating real fast like she was being chased by Shaun Johnson. And she said “MUM!” her mum said “what?” Katie said “James was playing frisbee with the plate and the plate got smashed!” James was grounded for a week, SHAME! he spent an hour crying like a girl in his room, he’s such a sookie. After James finished crying his mum came upstairs and he had to write an apology letter and had the clean up the bits and pieces of the plate with his OWN DIRTY HANDS!
The End! :)
By Vehar
Very nice Vehar!! Not sure my mum would be to impressed if that had happened at my place!
ReplyDeleteNice story Vehar!!
ReplyDeletemarvellous introduction and wonderful middle and great conclusion .... kah pai
ReplyDeleteA great opening sentence Vehar and strong use of adjectives. Great work! Gosh if that was my boys throwing plates they would be in trouble!!!! :)
ReplyDeleteAwesome work Vehar good words and language keep up the great work
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