Wednesday, May 30, 2012
Taking the Plunge (Vehar)
Just Jumped Out Of The Plane, I See The Beautiful Yellow Sun Shining In My Wrinkly Eyes, Feels Like I’m Walking On Sunshine, The Bright Blue Sky Is Inspiring Me, I Can Feel The Butterfly In My Stomach Making Me Happy. I Feel The Breeze Making Me Nervous, I Was Afraid To Pull The Big Red Parachute Out Because It Might Get Tangled, The Smell Of It *Breathe In* Breathe Out* Fresh Air. I Look Down, All I See Was The Blue Clear Water, I Got Ready To Pull Out My Parachute. 3 2 1 Ahhhh! 5 Minutes Later I See The Sunset, Haaa! How Romantic.
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I think this was really good , it described feelings and wrinkly eyes :)
ReplyDeletecool story bro
ReplyDeleteThat was a good story I liked the way that it felt like I was their!!!!
ReplyDeleteGreat! I like how you describe the background!! I could really get a picture in my mind!!
ReplyDeleteyou have a small head full of awesome ideas Vehar good job!(;
ReplyDeleteThat was nice Vehar great use of words good job!!!
ReplyDeleteGreat story Vehar it was very described writing keep up the work.
ReplyDeleteGreat description Vehar keep it up
ReplyDeleteI liked how you put in alliteration in your Writing!
ReplyDeleteGreat writing!