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Thursday, February 21, 2013

Blaithan's Fantastic Holiday


The Otematata Trip

On Monday the Mackenzies and my family went to Otematata. First we went to the kennels in Kaiapoi to drop off the dogs. Next we hopped back into the car and drove for about 4 hours to Otematata when we got there it was raining hard it was like bullets shooting from the sky. All the children raced towards our caravan while the adults put up the gazebo. In the morning we all went outside to have breakfast after half an hour or so the children and me sprinted to our parents and asked if we could ride down the rapids they said “Yes”. After that we had lunch it was pikelets YUM then the Christies and Mark and Caroline arrived then we went on the jet skis and the biscuit. After that we had sausages on the barbeque. The next day we had breakfast and went riding down the hill and done skids then we visited Papa Lez he gave us pineapple lumps, roses, chocolates and lots more. Then it started to rain we went inside and played a game of cranium brain breaks and read Harry Potter books (Franklin finished the series now). After that I played a game of check mate with Janelle. Then we had lunch and Ben ,Ryan, Maddie, Todd and Steve turned up we went down the rapids again and then we forced Spoon, Mark and Dad to go down the rapids with us they went down then tried to clean the buoys the current was so strong my dad was the only one who got halfway! Then we packed up to go home and left.
 We all had a great time and hope to go back this year.

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6 comments:

  1. UnknownFebruary 21, 2013 at 10:56 AM

    Well done Blaithan! This is a great piece of writing it sounds like you and your family had a great time. Next time we will work on organising your writing into paragraphs.

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  2. AnonymousFebruary 21, 2013 at 7:22 PM

    well done Blaithan!!!
    i wish i was there.
    you did a really good job on the piece of writing but i do agree with Mr creek it would be much more easy to read if it were in paragraphs.
    by Nikita :)

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  3. AnonymousFebruary 25, 2013 at 10:11 AM

    Awesome Blaithan! Your holiday sounded like a bunch of fun, although, next time you could put more full stops in.

    From Lucy

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  4. AnonymousFebruary 25, 2013 at 10:14 AM

    awsome blaithan it sounded relly cool
    how did you force the parents to
    go with you and what did you use
    to go down the raipids


    by tyler!!!!

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  5. AnonymousFebruary 25, 2013 at 10:32 AM

    good job blaithan

    i wish i was there i wish i could go on jet skis next time try para- graphas

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  6. AnonymousMarch 6, 2013 at 9:46 AM

    Well Done Blathian I think this is a great pieaece of writing it realy got me bloging
    By:Phoebe

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