The lane was night dark even at noon .I was thinking big time .why? it was like that for 4 straight days .it smelled like rontan food hanging around. The clock hit midnight it was getting cold wolfs hawling rats taking the last remains.I shot to the airport know one was there I ran as fast as I could back at my house I went to sleep hopeless thinking where is everyone?I was waiting for morning I couldnt sleep that night .I was ferious that morning.
By Jordan P
imagine if` that realy happened
ReplyDeleteGood job Jordan your next step is to correct that spelling using the spell check!
ReplyDeletei agree with that to mr creek anyways the rest is fantastic!!!
DeleteI love the way the opening sentence grabs the readers attention. :)
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